At least 300 words of the revision.

Revise and optimize the original personal statement based on my resume and the major that I’m applying for.

The original PS didn’t highlight how I’m suitable for this Master’s program. Please read my CV first, and write about two previous experiences related to the Master’s program.
Please also consider:
– Your own thought on this program
– How this program would further your future career goals
– Expand on the above by describing the strengths, ambitions, and experience you will bring to the program
– Describe a project that you might be interested in developing within this program